Please check my essay.i am preparing for IELTS so grade my writing and suggest me more. your help counts me a lot.?

The map describes about the island before and after the development of the tourism industry.Before the island was bare only with some few trees but after some time island is filled with restaurant and some accommodations for the visitors.

Island has turned down to a beautiful place for the visitors while before it was just a bare land with no social livings.

before in the north their was nothing but now people can find restaurant and in front of that a reception. Similarly, straight to the reception their is a pier in the south, the beach has turned down to a natural swimming pool in the west. On the same hand, some tress has been surrounded by six accommodations. In the heart of the island nine accommodation is beautifully place.

However, the eastern part of the island has not been changed since before.

Therefore, except to the eastern side, an island has been developed a lot before and now.

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